Writing-AWESOME! I am so exicited for writing, extremely good scenes-not done though.My story is about Arizona, she is very popular. Her friend is not popular at all and she doesn't want to be popular.Arizona doesn't know who to be friends with. Arizona's friends bully Madison - Arizona's unpopular friend...At recess and Arizona is with them at the time and a teacher sees the bullying Madison, so the teacher takes them to the office. the principal calls there parents . CUT OF PRINCIPAL SCENE!!! PUBLISHED STORY!!!
Reading:
KATE DICAMILLO
The Magicians Elephant
At the end of the century before last, in the market square of the city of Baltese , there stood a boy with a hat and a coin in his hand. The boy’s name was Peter Augustus Duchene, and the coin that he held did not belong to him but it was instead the property of his guardian, an old soldier named Vilna Lutz, who had sent the boy to the market for fish and bread.
I love this lead sooo much because it gives you backround info. so you know who the main charactors are right away, it makes you want to read more and more page by page , when I started this book I didn't want to put the book down, and you shouldn't either. The better the leads are the the better the books are.It makes me relived that i dont have to put the book down because it doesnt have a good lead, but i cant do that now because I LOVE this lead!!!
Writing:
Writing-AWESOME! I am so exicited for writing, extremely good scenes-not done though.My story is about Arizona, she is very popular. Her friend is not popular at all and she doesn't want to be popular.Arizona doesn't know who to be friends with. Arizona's friends bully Madison - Arizona's unpopular friend...At recess and Arizona is with them at the time and a teacher sees the bullying Madison, so the teacher takes them to the office. the principal calls there parents . CUT OF PRINCIPAL SCENE!!! PUBLISHED STORY!!!
Reading:
KATE DICAMILLO
The Magicians Elephant
At the end of the century before last, in the market square of the city of Baltese , there stood a boy with a hat and a coin in his hand. The boy’s name was Peter Augustus Duchene, and the coin that he held did not belong to him but it was instead the property of his guardian, an old soldier named Vilna Lutz, who had sent the boy to the market for fish and bread.
I love this lead sooo much because it gives you backround info. so you know who the main charactors are right away, it makes you want to read more and more page by page , when I started this book I didn't want to put the book down, and you shouldn't either. The better the leads are the the better the books are.It makes me relived that i dont have to put the book down because it doesnt have a good lead, but i cant do that now because I LOVE this lead!!!
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